Television shows?
The importance of television shows on society which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while other reject this notion. This will further elaborate my reason for the positive effects of this trend and this will lead to a logical conclusion. There are myriad of reason which will further explain this argument but the most preponderant stems from fact that television shows are good for our society because television shows teach us everything as well as there are so many television shows are broadcast on television moreover so many varieties of shows run on television some shows are good for watching like man versus wild which teach us how to survive in arduous situation. Another pivotal aspect of this argument is that some shows are absurd of watching therefore that types of shows effecting on human nature. Needless to say all these merits stand television shows on society in a good stead. Elaborating my view point this trend has some merits but the crucial effect is that television shows are good for students because students can learn so many thing from shows beside, television shows can developed our society hence, it is apparent why many are in favor of television shows on society. According to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach a conclusion that the benefits of television shows on society are indeed to great.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun thing seems to be countable; consider using: 'many things'.
Suggestion: many things
... students because students can learn so many thing from shows beside, television shows c...
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Line 1, column 1142, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dents can learn so many thing from shows beside, television shows can developed o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1180.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 235.0 242.827586207 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02127659574 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62142856702 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 139.433497537 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514893617021 0.580463131201 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 378.0 379.143842365 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6551724138 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.5024630542 161% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 115.247382546 50.4703680194 228% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 168.571428571 104.977214359 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.5714285714 20.9669160288 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57142857143 7.25397266985 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.12807881773 24% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.573213110374 0.242375264174 236% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.296003635425 0.0925447433944 320% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.17077684963 0.071462118173 239% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.573213110374 0.151781067708 378% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0609392437508 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 12.6369458128 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 53.1260098522 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.9458128079 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 55.0591133005 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 9.94827586207 206% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.3980295567 146% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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