There are social, medical and technical problems associated with the use of mobile phones. Do you agree that the problems outweigh the benefits f mobile phones?
Surely there has been no time in the history where the lives of people have changed more dramatically. A typical day reveals mobile phones has been one of the prominent topics in the contemporary discussions. People always used to analyze and explain that mobiles phones are causing medical and technical problems. Furthermore, I will discuss both point of view agree and disagree in next paragraphs.
To begin with, for this modern era mobile phone had become a basic need for everyone. with help of mobile phone we can get latest news or information about the world. Mobile makes us sociable with everyone with the contacts of new different apps. Many people use phones for gaining knowledge from internet. Mobiles phones have changed everything with help of mobile we can do online shopping and also we can earn money from internet. Mainly mobiles phones are for calling to another person who is sitting far from us. Now we can do many things on it such as we can call, use internet, earn money and many more.
On the other hand, if mobiles phones have advantages than obvious it also have disadvantages. Mobile phones causes social, medical and technical problems if we use it most. Phones have ray system which is directly connected to the satellite and these rays causes many medical problems. Mobile have technical problems such as sometimes it get blast due to system problem.
In conclusion, Mobiles are beneficial if it is used for less time. Using mobile phones more socially can give birth to social life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: get the latest
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Did you mean 'has'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1269.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 258.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91860465116 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47998114347 2.71678728327 91% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56976744186 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 17.236197527 50.4703680194 34% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.6470588235 104.977214359 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1764705882 20.9669160288 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88235294118 7.25397266985 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.401197523377 0.242375264174 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148473834825 0.0925447433944 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108937760739 0.071462118173 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.253308255926 0.151781067708 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573244678837 0.0609392437508 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 12.6369458128 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.1260098522 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.66 11.5310837438 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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