There are social medical,technical problems associated with the use of mobile.Do you agree that the problems outweigh the benefits of mobile phones?
The importance of mobile phones which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while other reject this notion. This will elaborate both aspects of this trend this will lead to a logical conclusion.
There are myriad of reasons which will further explain this argument but the most preponderant stems from fact that mobile phones are beneficial for today generation because they can do easily to their study by mobile phones as well as mobile phones help in any work we can pay our electricity by mobile phones moreover , we can buy anything from internet by the help of mobile phones .another pivotal aspects from fact that we can make strong relationship by mobile phones because we can talk worldwide by mobile phones .Needless to say all these merits mobile phones in a good stead .
However, there are some pitfalls that negate this argument and which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of this trend but the most alarming is that when offspring use to much cell phones they can decrease their study knowledge as well as they get far from outdoor activities . besides mobile phone can get hazardous effects on children eyes .Hence it is apparent why many are against mobile phones.
According to this argument aforementioned above one can reach a conclusion that the benefits of mobile phones are instrumental indeed .Nevertheless, the potential drawbacks should not be overlooked either.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, hence, however, look, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 6.10837438424 213% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1230.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 240.0 242.827586207 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.125 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63780551166 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6551724138 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.5024630542 195% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 165.952218692 50.4703680194 329% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 205.0 104.977214359 195% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.0 20.9669160288 191% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.5 7.25397266985 200% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.33497536946 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162529128906 0.242375264174 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077197001074 0.0925447433944 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499344151753 0.071462118173 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0951228170391 0.151781067708 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400068729694 0.0609392437508 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.7 12.6369458128 180% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.88 53.1260098522 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 10.9458128079 173% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 55.0591133005 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.94827586207 196% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.3980295567 173% => OK
text_standard: 23.0 10.5123152709 219% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.