There is no need of newspapers in modern world. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The important effect of newspapers is not need in this modern world which was always debatable has now become more controversal. The substantial influence of newspapers is not necessary in this modern centuray has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend on newspapers is not required nowdays in current year. It can be agreed that newspapers reading waste the people time and its not benificial for human.
At the outset, there are mumerous reason why newspaper is not necessary in this modern time but the most conspicious one steam's from the fact that there are many modern technology developed instead of newspapers. As an illustration, long time of reading newspapers harm people eye problems for example, a study shows in america long time reading of newspapers develop the vision problem in people. In adittion, in this twenty first centuary there are many new media and technology developed to replace the newespapers like, tv, computer, radio etc.Thus, newspapers is not needed in this current generation.
Another key of justification for upholding this notion is that long time of reading newspapers develops obesity which may lead a health problem in people. For instance, newspapers users are laizer to compare with radio and computer techonolgy users.
From what has been discussed above it can be concluded that the impact of we do not need the newspapers anymore in this modern world is prominent and newspapers is not good for people. Newspapers reading consumes the people productive time and they may miss their important work.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 43, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'needed'.
Suggestion: needed
...e important effect of newspapers is not need in this modern world which was always d...
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Line 3, column 420, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: twenty-first
...problem in people. In adittion, in this twenty first centuary there are many new media and t...
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Line 3, column 549, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thus
...wespapers like, tv, computer, radio etc.Thus, newspapers is not needed in this curre...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, so, thus, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1325.0 1207.87684729 110% => OK
No of words: 254.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21653543307 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77057121405 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535433070866 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 411.3 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.5747785824 50.4703680194 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.5 104.977214359 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4 20.9669160288 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 7.25397266985 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227351139708 0.242375264174 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102712315355 0.0925447433944 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732558628778 0.071462118173 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157409699495 0.151781067708 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0764584303327 0.0609392437508 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 12.6369458128 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 53.1260098522 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.9458128079 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.