Tobacco, mainly in the form of cigarettes is one of the most widely used drugs in the world. Over a billion adults legally smoke tobacco every day. The long-term health costs are high- for the smokers themselves, and for the wider community in terms of health care costs and lost productivity.Do Governments have a legitimate role in protecting citizens from the harmful effects of their own decisions to smoke, or are such decisions up to an individual?”
Tobacco is one of the most threat to people around the world. It contains higly dangerous substances that in the long term, raze everyone's health. Before taking any decisions, it is necessary to weigh and understand who has the role in protecting citizens.
First of all, government ought to take actions in order to protect its community. It is crucial to implement laws that prohibit people from using cigarrets. Moreover, adds containing information about the risks of the consumption of tobacco, should be placed in special locations where everyone can see.
However, it is up to each individual to realize the issues caused by cigarrets. A person should be aware of the dangerous and stop using them. It is crucial to comprehend that the only person who will suffer is oneself and the best way to ditch the drawback is stopping eradicating oneself.
Finally, each individual has to fight him/herself because there is no another person, if not he or she, better to deal with this colossal problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 232, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on about the risks of the consumption of tobacco, should be placed in special loc...
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Line 4, column 68, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...s to fight him/herself because there is no another person, if not he or she, bette...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, moreover, so, as to, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 837.0 1207.87684729 69% => OK
No of words: 168.0 242.827586207 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98214285714 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.92707691288 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71516668034 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 139.433497537 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.678571428571 0.580463131201 117% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 379.143842365 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.6214217427 50.4703680194 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.7 104.977214359 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 20.9669160288 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.25397266985 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108722875583 0.242375264174 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.044484482271 0.0925447433944 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061879131179 0.071462118173 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0620020672906 0.151781067708 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0632697081678 0.0609392437508 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 12.6369458128 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 53.1260098522 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.9458128079 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 11.5310837438 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 55.0591133005 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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