the violent portrayed on TV and in the movies leads to an increase in crime in our society. people who watch violent movies are more likely to become criminal. Do you agree or disagree?
recently, there are many programs are being telecasted on tv like commedy, movies, songs and etcetera. some of them are violent while others are not. Violence in tv and movies has sparked an outgoing controversy whether these programs lead to increase crime or not. some people advocates that tv and movies incerase such crime in the society. however, others are opine to that. I will discuss the controversial aspect throughout the essay.
To commence with, there is a myriad of stance in my favour. however, the most predominated is that many youngers especially teenagers are getting attracked very much by looking thoes programs. some time they want to mimic them and apply the same techiques in the society. For a example, recent study done by the New York university demonstrats that more the 30% of begninners are responsible to increase crime in the United States. Consequently, government should take necessarily action towards them to save the local people.
On the other hand, some people reject this notion. As per them, it totally depends on the atmosphere in which the children spend their childhood. Scoiety plays a major role in kid's upbringing. A salient example, a survey conducted by Sydney university indicates that only 20% of children get impacted from such programs in tv or movies. Hence, other social factors are also plays important role for increasing the crime.
To conculde, I pen down by saying "Every garden has its own weeds". It's totally depende on the adolescents upbringings and the society. We can not directly blame to tv and movie for this.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, hence, however, look, so, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1346.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 262.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13740458015 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73041387993 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637404580153 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6551724138 150% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.5024630542 63% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.0871459352 50.4703680194 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.8421052632 104.977214359 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7894736842 20.9669160288 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.68421052632 7.25397266985 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.33497536946 169% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203406823453 0.242375264174 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0532914310779 0.0925447433944 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0715084497502 0.071462118173 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110928988922 0.151781067708 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0856765283055 0.0609392437508 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 12.6369458128 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 53.1260098522 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.9458128079 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.94 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 55.0591133005 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.94827586207 60% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.3980295567 69% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.