we should require more financial support from the government: health or education to what extent do you agree or disagree, use your experience.
The importance of health and education which was always has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while other reject this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my opinion, the former proposition appears to be more rational. This essay will further elaborate both positive impacts of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
There are myriad of reasons which will further explain this arguments but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that government should more support to health and education as both plays crucial role in everyone’s life. Another pivotal aspect of this trend is that education plays crucial role in every person’s life. Needless to say, all these merits stand in a good stead.
Elaborating my viewpoint, there are some more merits but one of the crucial effects is that health also is very important for person because if person is a healthy they can do any work easily. Besides, government should provide the free education to children and build more hospitals for people. Hence, it is apparent why many are against of this trend.
According to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach to a conclusion that the benefits of health and education are indeed too great to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, if, so, thus, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1149.0 1207.87684729 95% => OK
No of words: 224.0 242.827586207 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12946428571 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72857712579 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 139.433497537 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59375 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.4394399015 50.4703680194 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.454545455 104.977214359 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3636363636 20.9669160288 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.54545454545 7.25397266985 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142783358034 0.242375264174 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512853809899 0.0925447433944 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495535654704 0.071462118173 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0870709479056 0.151781067708 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.027083954294 0.0609392437508 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 12.6369458128 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 55.0591133005 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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