what are the Advantages & Disadvantages of Cashless Society. Which one save your money. Write in your own view?

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what are the Advantages & Disadvantages of Cashless Society. Which one save your money. Write in your own view?

Nowadays, cashless society is becoming more popular in all country, the money which can use and transfer through credit card or debit card. I my view point the money need to protect safe and the usage of money should be in profit in a legal way.

In begin of this debate demerit of cashless society, today cyber crime is increased so the customer need to know the knowledge of cashless transaction otherwise they need to lose their money and when during the purchase anything by card the taxation amount is double. Further, during emergency time like calamity, the network will not work properly it have big draw back.
On the contrary, people no need to carry more money in wallet, they can carry by card. For instance, if lost their wallet the money never got back again, instead of they carry card even if it lost also no problem, inform to their bank customer care they block your card immediately so that your money is in safe hand.
The money can save through the cashless process because of while purchasing you need to pay 35.20$ you can swipe right amount, in without card transaction you need to pay 35.50$. So, 0.30$ is loss for you.
In conclusion, the cashless system developed in all country and it is safe mode of transaction but need to improve more protection and back-up plan to.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 231, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a legal way" with adverb for "legal"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... the usage of money should be in profit in a legal way. In begin of this debate demerit of ...
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Line 3, column 353, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
..., the network will not work properly it have big draw back. On the contrary, people...
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Line 3, column 362, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'drawn'.
Suggestion: drawn
...work will not work properly it have big draw back. On the contrary, people no need ...
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Line 5, column 96, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$20'.
Suggestion: $20
... of while purchasing you need to pay 35.20$ you can swipe right amount, in without ...
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Line 5, column 175, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$50'.
Suggestion: $50
...out card transaction you need to pay 35.50$. So, 0.30$ is loss for you. In conclus...
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Line 5, column 185, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$30'.
Suggestion: $30
...ansaction you need to pay 35.50$. So, 0.30$ is loss for you. In conclusion, the ca...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 6.10837438424 213% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1075.0 1207.87684729 89% => OK
No of words: 231.0 242.827586207 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65367965368 5.00649968141 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29186336726 2.71678728327 84% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 139.433497537 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584415584416 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 379.143842365 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.1043314208 50.4703680194 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.444444444 104.977214359 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6666666667 20.9669160288 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.77777777778 7.25397266985 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154978142669 0.242375264174 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0591513024246 0.0925447433944 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426608489735 0.071462118173 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0803382570648 0.151781067708 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370881811599 0.0609392437508 61% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 12.6369458128 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 53.1260098522 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 11.5310837438 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.32886699507 93% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 55.0591133005 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.94827586207 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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