What is your opinion about top executives at companies getting their employees involved in the decision making process

Essay topics:

What is your opinion about top executives at companies getting their employees involved in the
decision-making process?

In recent times, engaging employees in the decision making process of a company has became a debatable topic. Some people argue that it is good to involve the employees while making important decisions as they can provide multiple viewpoints whereas others reject this notion saying this might lead to misuse of confidential data. This essay will discuss why it is important for companies to engage their employees in crucial decision-making meetings.

There are myriad reasons that stem to the fact that employees should be involved in decision making but the most important one is the way employees provide their valuable suggestions after analyzing the problem from different angles. Employees can help to fill the gaps present in the organization as they are the ones who works at the ground level and know the loop holes. For instance, employees know how bad workers misuse the existing policies, so they can provide best strategies to fix them. Hence, it is apparent why employees need to be part of decision making process of a company.

Furthermore, employees' participation in the decision-making of a company motivates them, because it makes them feel they are important for the organization they work for. To exemplify this, a recent survey was conducted on two groups which were divided based on their active or inactive involvement in organization. Results show that group which was actively involved in process showed better performance than the other group. This makes a clear case why employees need to be involved in decision making setup.

In conclusion, this essay has discussed how engaging the employees in process can help to provide better inputs and enhance employee performance. In my opinion, it is suggested for every company to take their employee feedback while making important decisions.

Votes
Average: 9.3 (3 votes)
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Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 85, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
...ecision making process of a company has became a debatable topic. Some people argue th...
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Line 3, column 462, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'provide the best'.
Suggestion: provide the best
...suse the existing policies, so they can provide best strategies to fix them. Hence, it is ap...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, if, so, whereas, while, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 20.9802955665 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 1207.87684729 127% => OK
No of words: 292.0 242.827586207 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25684931507 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81349946275 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551369863014 0.580463131201 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 468.9 379.143842365 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6287457489 50.4703680194 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.076923077 104.977214359 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 20.9669160288 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.25397266985 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267408248116 0.242375264174 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117197209958 0.0925447433944 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518868614076 0.071462118173 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190067434754 0.151781067708 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0172675167562 0.0609392437508 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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