Working employees have paid leaves. Is it good or bad?
Whenever a contract is signed between an employee and employer, there are some conditions on which both parties agree. One of them is annual leaves which is paid mostly. There is a debate in companies whether it proves to be useful or not. This essay will discuss how paid leaves can be beneficial for a company.
Taking a break from normal working routine can prove to be a healthy for anyone. Nowadays because of competition in market among companies, employees are under great stress to achieve the targets which may be time or cost management for their organisation. For example, a client or a developer in construction field will be willing to give their next projects to the company who can finish the project within time and cost. This puts an immense mental pressure on the employees. Therefore, once these employees are given a break to relax and spend time with family, they can give excellent results in future.
Also, giving a break to key personnel in the organisation transfers the load on other junior staff. This gives them an opportunity to learn and grow, at the same time it also puts the company at an advantage by preparing young people to lead once old people retires. For instance, NPC a giant construction company suddely collapsed as they did not have replacements for their key personnels, when all of them resigned suddennly due to a dispute with their managing director. Thus, people should be trained enough to take a lead when required in a company.
In conclusion, paid leaves improve a persons mental health as well it gives a chance to young people to prove themselves. In my opinion, paid leaves have more advantages than disadvantages.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 599, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...family, they can give excellent results in future. Also, giving a break to key personn...
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Line 5, column 285, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ce old people retires. For instance, NPC a giant construction company suddely col...
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Line 7, column 36, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a person' or simply 'persons'?
Suggestion: a person; persons
.... In conclusion, paid leaves improve a persons mental health as well it gives a chanc...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 76, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...a persons mental health as well it gives a chance to young people to prove themse...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, may, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 286.0 242.827586207 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87412587413 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69805942691 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 139.433497537 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 379.143842365 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8186388579 50.4703680194 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.9333333333 104.977214359 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0666666667 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.25397266985 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157606130097 0.242375264174 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590871789558 0.0925447433944 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694419589916 0.071462118173 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117491408966 0.151781067708 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0826209908482 0.0609392437508 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 12.6369458128 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.1260098522 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 11.5310837438 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 599, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...family, they can give excellent results in future. Also, giving a break to key personn...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 285, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ce old people retires. For instance, NPC a giant construction company suddely col...
^^
Line 7, column 36, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a person' or simply 'persons'?
Suggestion: a person; persons
.... In conclusion, paid leaves improve a persons mental health as well it gives a chanc...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 76, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...a persons mental health as well it gives a chance to young people to prove themse...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, may, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 286.0 242.827586207 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87412587413 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69805942691 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 139.433497537 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 379.143842365 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8186388579 50.4703680194 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.9333333333 104.977214359 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0666666667 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.25397266985 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157606130097 0.242375264174 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590871789558 0.0925447433944 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694419589916 0.071462118173 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117491408966 0.151781067708 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0826209908482 0.0609392437508 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 12.6369458128 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.1260098522 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 11.5310837438 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.