working from home is now easier then ever due to advances in technology do you think this model of working has more advantages or disadvantages for employees support your point of view with reason and examples from your own experience or observation

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working from home is now easier then ever due to advances in technology =.
do you think this model of working has more advantages or disadvantages for employees support your point of view with reason and examples from your own experience or observation.

work from home is an easy way to compete a work with not wasting our time. this pharaghraph will be paraphrased consequently we find more advantages than disadvantages
for employees form my point of view

firstly, work from home is a method initiated for competing a work in an easy way where we can find ourselves sitting in a comfortable way and by finishing it.
due to this pandemic situation the work from home palys a major role nowadays. employers and employees fell very light by encouraging this kind of activities
MNC companies watched in a different perspective and they made more profit.

secondly, some companies felt due to work from home there are many profit for the companies like not providing the travelling salary or fees which can be cutted down
moreover we find many company building rent is been stop which palys a major role and in a huge amount and also we find the maintanes is not needed. This pandemic
many companies had offered people by continuing work from home for the future. so, this make a advantages perspective by saving money from electricity, travel fees,
maintanes ect

to conclude with, work from home plays a huge role as an advantage of saving and cutting down the cost which can be spent for usefull ways or consequently, they can make
profit with the company savings.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...way where we can find ourselves sitting in a comfortable way and by finishing it. due to this pande...
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...full ways or consequently, they can make profit with the company savings.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1113.0 1207.87684729 92% => OK
No of words: 228.0 242.827586207 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88157894737 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68991982544 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 139.433497537 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539473684211 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 343.8 379.143842365 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6551724138 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.5024630542 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 105.80690923 50.4703680194 210% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 159.0 104.977214359 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.5714285714 20.9669160288 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2857142857 7.25397266985 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.12807881773 242% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 21.0 5.33497536946 394% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286793829196 0.242375264174 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164711790831 0.0925447433944 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611801503308 0.071462118173 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129976565227 0.151781067708 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.072230105733 0.0609392437508 119% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 12.6369458128 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.62 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 55.0591133005 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.3980295567 142% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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