Nowadays, it is common knowledge that plastic pollutes the environment. Thus, do you think companies should be allowed to use plastic containers for their products? Please state what your opinion is and why.
The environment around us constitutes of all those factors, which influence on all survival living beings for instance human being, flora and fauna. As soon as an imbalance occurs in those factors, our existence will be threatened. Likewise, plastic is harmful for environment, but most companies use plastic containers or polythenes to pack their goods. I will discuss this topic in upcoming in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, plastic things spread pollution in the environment, because it is non bio degradble, whereas other paper or cotton bags are dissolved in the soil, which increase the fertility of soil, it is beneficial for farmers. Moreover, these products are very harmful for asthma and skin patients, they have face many problems for breathing.
Apart from this, if customers will carry their carry bags from homes for packing, they can also save their money, that is consumed on buying plastic bags, so many companies spend their money for making the plastic containers, that will be also saved. Furthermore, if people will prefer cotton or handmade bags, then the market of those bags will also raised, due to which many people will get employment in those factories.
In conclusion, it can be said that all companies should not be allowed to use the plastic containers. Government should ban the plastic in the world and make some laws against the people, who use plastic bags, but government should install some factories, which can provide things made by other materials.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding environment'?
Suggestion: The surrounding environment
The environment around us constitutes of all those factors, which...
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Line 1, column 27, Rule ID: CONSTITUTES_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'consists of'?
Suggestion: consists of
The environment around us constitutes of all those factors, which influence on a...
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Line 1, column 382, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'in upcoming'.
Suggestion: in upcoming
... their goods. I will discuss this topic in upcoming in upcoming paragraphs. To begin with, plastic thi...
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Line 2, column 312, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'faced'.
Suggestion: faced
...for asthma and skin patients, they have face many problems for breathing. Apart fro...
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Line 3, column 351, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'raise'
Suggestion: raise
...then the market of those bags will also raised, due to which many people will get empl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, likewise, moreover, so, then, whereas, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 6.10837438424 213% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 31.9359605911 72% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1257.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 244.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15163934426 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61266875578 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590163934426 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 379.143842365 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.6157635468 195% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.3855115073 50.4703680194 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.7 104.977214359 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4 20.9669160288 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1 7.25397266985 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267325932774 0.242375264174 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113130596817 0.0925447433944 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103966998858 0.071462118173 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162464163362 0.151781067708 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468060056058 0.0609392437508 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 53.1260098522 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 11.5310837438 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.