Medical technology can increase the humans life expectancy. Is it blessing or curse?

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Medical technology can increase the humans life expectancy. Is it blessing or curse?

The importance of medical technology which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while others reject this notion. The substantial influence of medical technology has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend in recent years. In my opinion, the formal proposition appears to be more rational. This essay will elaborate both positive and negative effects of the above trend and this will to a logical conclusion.

There are myriad reasons which will further explain argument but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that

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Average: 2.2 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 116, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...reponderant one stems from the fact that
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, while, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 20.9802955665 38% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 31.9359605911 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 525.0 1207.87684729 43% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 97.0 242.827586207 40% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41237113402 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.13828899271 3.92707691288 80% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74602486636 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 72.0 139.433497537 52% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.742268041237 0.580463131201 128% => OK
syllable_count: 164.7 379.143842365 43% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6551724138 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8797993305 50.4703680194 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 104.977214359 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.9669160288 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.25397266985 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.12807881773 48% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0733770436014 0.242375264174 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0366318425817 0.0925447433944 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454628784242 0.071462118173 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0410163200367 0.151781067708 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410163200367 0.0609392437508 67% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 12.6369458128 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 11.5310837438 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.95 8.32886699507 119% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 55.0591133005 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.

Rates: 22.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 90
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