The world’s governments and organizations are confronting multiple issues. Which do you think is the most pressing problem for the inhabitants on our planet?
In this modern era, there is an ongoing deliberation among people on the issues facing by the inhabitants of our planet. While some people argue that economic factors are the main issues faced by the government, on my point of view enviromental pollution is the main issue prevailing in the modern context. In this essay, I shall discuss my argument while analyzing both the advantages and disadvantages of the argument.
First and foremost, we will look into the factors effecting environmental pollution. For example, fossil combution will increase the carbondioxide on the atmosphere and it will create greenhouse effect on the planet. Consequently, the glaciers starts to melt and the sea level starts to increase creating threats to small islands such as Maldives. In addition, adverse weather effects will destroy crops and it creates an unfavourable impact on national economy.
On the other hand, some people do not consider about the environment because they are unable to see the consequences in the short run. Therefore, they do not consider in living in an enviromentally friendly way. Apart from that, governments of developing countries may not have sufficient fund to invest in sustainable development products.
In conclusion, it is recommended that governments should promote eco culture inside their organizations and countries. Governments can promote sustainable energy such as wind power and solar power inside the country by providing subsidies for that industry. It is beleived, that governments and organizations should identify their main issues at first and prioritize them considering their impact to the organizations or countries.
- Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations by providing such things as food and education? Or is it the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their citizens themselves? 73
- "Prevention is better than cure."Out of a country's health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventative measures.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 78
- The government should invest more money in science education rather than other subjects to develop the country. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 38
- Technology allows us to have usefulness and interesting life than in past? Do you agree or disagree? 80
- The world’s governments and organizations are confronting multiple issues. Which do you think is the most pressing problem for the inhabitants on our planet? 88
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, look, may, so, therefore, while, apart from, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1413.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 256.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51953125 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1286282648 2.71678728327 115% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59765625 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 379.143842365 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.5781395331 50.4703680194 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 108.692307692 104.977214359 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6923076923 20.9669160288 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9230769231 7.25397266985 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116179474749 0.242375264174 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.038637202052 0.0925447433944 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367595539177 0.071462118173 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0600321656849 0.151781067708 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306316133917 0.0609392437508 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 12.6369458128 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 11.5310837438 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 55.0591133005 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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