xenophobia has accelerated rapidly in the western countries
It has long been a subject of discussion whether xenophobia has accelerated rapidly in the western counties or not. In my opinion, the former notion several elements that deserve attention and I will explain why using pertinent arguments.
There are myriad of arguments in favor of my context, and most conspicuous one lies in the fact that people should be extra careful with their decision. For example, according to a recent survey done by Stanford University, 45% people benefit from the above mentioned notion, whereas 30% people face disadvantages due to it. Hence, it is apparent why many citizens are in favor of the above stance.
Another argument in support of my view is that governments worldwide have become more active in dealing with this situation. To illustrate, as per recent academic research carried out by the Australian government 60% citizens gained immensely from the proposed government reforms. They improved their existing scenario tremendously that paved the way for a better economic future. Therefore, not only will make people more careful and pragmatic in their approach, but also will lead to a better living standard.
From what has been discussed above, it is clear that the benefits of the given topic significantly outweigh the drawbacks. Lastly, in my opinion, it would be wise to say xenophobia has accelerate rapidly in the western countries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 185, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'accelerated'.
Suggestion: accelerated
... it would be wise to say xenophobia has accelerate rapidly in the western countries. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, lastly, so, therefore, whereas, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1169.0 1207.87684729 97% => OK
No of words: 223.0 242.827586207 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24215246637 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79179586519 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654708520179 0.580463131201 113% => OK
syllable_count: 369.0 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.3313281658 50.4703680194 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 106.272727273 104.977214359 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2727272727 20.9669160288 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.27272727273 7.25397266985 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150591060531 0.242375264174 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686615668943 0.0925447433944 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.145714568989 0.071462118173 204% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122680913653 0.151781067708 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122696028669 0.0609392437508 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 12.6369458128 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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