Xenophobia has accelerated rapidly in the Western countries. According to you what solutions can be proposed by the government and individuals?
Xenophobia is a deep-rooted fear towards foreigners or strangers and this sometimes creates violence. The fear of losing identity, aggression, suspicion of its activity are the some of the reasons for xenophobia. The preventive measures should be taken by the government and individuals to cope with.
Xenophobia is mostly seen in western countries because a large scale of people around the world is migrated to these countries for a better carrier. Their different wear, language etc often gets other people suspicious resulting discriminatory activities, violence, abuse of all types. Police are untrained to overcome the worse situation between refugee and perpetrators.So these situations may affect the peace of countries which further turns into racism.
So the government should take care this problem very seriously and implement preventive measures. They should show their real political power to create laws against such crimes or elect a body of experts to manage such situation.
In addition to this, the xenophobic condition causes to lose the relationship among countries which affect the global market badly. The people, especially in western countries should aware to hate discriminatory against colour, religion, national originality and disability. The government officials must create an organisation where the victim can complain.
In a nutshell, by implementing such steps, we can deal with Xenophobia but both government and individuals should work jointly to eradicate it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1289.0 1207.87684729 107% => OK
No of words: 224.0 242.827586207 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.75446428571 5.00649968141 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02953349254 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 139.433497537 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.665178571429 0.580463131201 115% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.3105122633 50.4703680194 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 107.416666667 104.977214359 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.9669160288 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.41666666667 7.25397266985 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 2.75862068966 290% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139158844191 0.242375264174 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0524923232539 0.0925447433944 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531637090349 0.071462118173 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.081677333583 0.151781067708 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505813708477 0.0609392437508 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 53.1260098522 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.07 11.5310837438 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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