Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Advertising can tell you a lot about a country. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Have you ever been interrupted by advertising while watching your interested programs on TV? There are 2 common opinions about advertisements: some people say they benefit our life, others say they create discontentment. But we all agree that advertising have great impact on society. From my point of view, through advertising we know a lot about a country about economy, social problems, as well as spiritual and cultural life.
First of all, advertising let us know about a country’s economy. One of the most common advertisement we see nowadays are the promotion of product or services. Advertiser assure a product or service’s quality, also its benefits then by somehow persuade the customers why they should to buy it. Base on products which are advertised, we can know about the production status of a country and its international trade like import or export business. For example, when you witch on a TV, and most of advertisements you see are about selling farm products, you will know the country is developing agriculture or there is high demand of farm products there. Or, if you live in Vietnam, but too many advertisements are about China’s products, you will think Vietnam is importing them from China because they can’t produce by themselves, or Chinese prices are lower, or China is selling their products in order to compete domestic companies. Clearly, advertising tell us a lot a country’s economy.
Additionally, advertising let us know about a country’s social problems. In fact, advertising is not only used to promote the economy, but also to generate awareness among public about noticeable problems on society. They can used advertisements to aware people which product they can use and which they should say no. Images on cigarettes can be said as one of the most typical example. The images are about lung cancer, heart attack, or the sick which advise people to give up smoking. The Ministry of Health can advertise to educate people about certain diseases or danger (for instance: AIDS, TB, viral diseases…). The can also be used by the government to aware about coming natural disasters like thunderstorm, tsunami, earthquake… so that people have time to prepare and protect themselves from danger. We all can see, through advertising, we can know many news about a country’s social problem.
Furthermore, advertising let us know about a country’s spiritual and culture life. Through advertising, people inform public about their country’s unique features, and its social events like festivals, concerts or performances. For example, before visiting a new country, if visitors want to know about its historical places, what traditional dishes they should try, or which language they can speak there…they will spend time searching advertisements write about it. Or, charities can use media to advertise about the illnesses and encourage people to donations. Social organization and NGOS can use the means of advertisement for promoting their campaigns. Advertising about compassionate hearts often appear in public make us think local people in the country are nice and helpful. In the contrast, advertising about guns, violent TV episodes or alerting for the robber appear too much in a country make us think about its people are aggressive, and untrustworthy.
To sum up, advertising is one of the most important mean of communications in every country. Advertisements are not only used for distributing information, but also for us to know about what are happening in the country.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 177, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'assures'.
Suggestion: assures
...tion of product or services. Advertiser assure a product or service's quality, al...
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Line 3, column 498, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the advertisements') or simply say ''most advertisements''.
Suggestion: most of the advertisements; most advertisements
...or example, when you witch on a TV, and most of advertisements you see are about selling farm products...
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Line 5, column 232, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'use'
Suggestion: use
...oticeable problems on society. They can used advertisements to aware people which pr...
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Line 5, column 624, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...r instance: AIDS, TB, viral diseases…. The can also be used by the government to a...
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Line 5, column 864, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...n see, through advertising, we can know many news about a country's social prob...
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Line 5, column 864, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun news seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much news', 'a good deal of news'.
Suggestion: much news; a good deal of news
...n see, through advertising, we can know many news about a country's social problem. ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'furthermore', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'well', 'while', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in fact', 'as well as', 'first of all', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.243684992571 0.229887763892 106% => OK
Verbs: 0.15750371471 0.158761421928 99% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0698365527489 0.0866891130778 81% => OK
Adverbs: 0.037147102526 0.046263068375 80% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0653789004458 0.0685040099705 95% => OK
Prepositions: 0.117384843982 0.118717715034 99% => OK
Participles: 0.035661218425 0.0351676179071 101% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.16241190477 2.67179642975 118% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0208023774146 0.0309702414327 67% => OK
Particles: 0.00297176820208 0.00188951952338 157% => OK
Determiners: 0.0549777117385 0.0887237588012 62% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0267459138187 0.0209618222197 128% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0133729569094 0.0139019557991 96% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3575.0 2387.08602151 150% => OK
No of words: 566.0 408.028673835 139% => OK
Chars per words: 6.31625441696 5.86048508987 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.87757670434 4.48200974243 109% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.371024734982 0.338922669872 109% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.286219081272 0.251872472559 114% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.227915194346 0.174417080927 131% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.157243816254 0.112833075102 139% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16241190477 2.67179642975 118% => OK
Unique words: 271.0 212.727598566 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.478798586572 0.524397521467 91% => OK
Word variations: 57.6653878781 59.2087087015 97% => OK
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6684587814 135% => OK
Sentence length: 20.2142857143 20.5533526081 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2300819261 48.84282405 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.678571429 120.699889404 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2142857143 20.5533526081 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.535714285714 0.644075263715 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.54480286738 108% => OK
Readability: 48.8361938415 45.7405998639 107% => OK
Elegance: 1.52571428571 1.45489161554 105% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320491210241 0.300154397459 107% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.121015207755 0.103427244359 117% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0912964244219 0.0752933317313 121% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.455754794716 0.497263757937 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.117663378146 0.151897553556 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114155161097 0.114077575197 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406520999926 0.0781384742642 52% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.362888080586 0.336927656856 108% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0988555263088 0.067059652881 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203659098663 0.210909579961 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529177167886 0.0618886996521 86% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8870967742 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.86379928315 285% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.42114695341 131% => OK
Negative topic words: 11.0 2.4623655914 447% => Less negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.75985663082 181% => OK
Total topic words: 27.0 13.6433691756 198% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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