"Some people believe that government officials must carry out the will of the people they serve. Others believe that officials should base their decisions on their own judgment.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented."
The governing of a people is the ability to lead and provide for their todays and make room for the needs of tomorrow, whether the people consciously understand this second part or not. Thus, the method employed in tending to all a people desires is not set in stone, it is as complex as it is straightforward. I mostly agree with the prompt that representatives of the people in governance should do as the people requires; However, this is on the bases that these needs and desires are rational and sustainable. I will be expressing this agreement with two main pointers.
Firstly, Democracy, hitherto has been the most preferred of leading strategy is simply the government by the people and for the people. This means that in leading, as the prompt stipulates, official should follow through on what those whom they lead require, ask or agree upon. Take for example in the recent (2024) electing of the President of the United States of American, Trump. It is the duty of citizens to choose their leader by voting their conscience. This was reflective in the vote and House numbers, where Trump won with over 70% voting and the required seat number. This was the people's choice, by numbers. Alternatively, look at Nigeria in the previous 2023 election, where no one is certain how the numbers said what they did. It was obvious that the voting data was altered to sought a minority. As a testament, after the elections, the succeeding events where court cases, riots and many many more. Thus, in not doing the will of the people, will bring about chaos in a society.
Take a look also at this other situation. In ruling a people, the crux is creating a platform whereby the society thrives, businesses succeed, and people have access to most of the amenities they require. Take for example in these two societies, Nigeria and America. The basic requirement of a people are affordable energy, infrastructures, Safety, and affordable health amenity. In Nigeria, where these are lacking, the streets are filled often with rioting, the death rate of the people burgeons daily and there is increasing police brutality, let's not forget the inability to do business. Because these needs are not met, there is no peace Nigeria currently. Whereas in America, where these things are a norm in the society; people have equall access to energy, security, health, amongst other requests. In comparing both society one would conclude that the government officials in Nigeria are not carrying out the people's will, which is even there right, where those in America are. So, there is violation of rights in Nigeria.
However, I do concede that the request of the people is not always reasoning; Thus, the school of thoughts that the officials should serve based on their conscience is valid fpr some scenerio. For example in the providing of energy, people just want cheap energy, regardless of if it's safe for the environment. Thus, the officials doing this would harm our future more. Rather, they should balance accessibility and cost effectivly.
Conclusively, both conscience and doing the will of the people should be effectively balanced; As one cannot holistically stand on its own, rater they are interdependent.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 312, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...is as complex as it is straightforward. I mostly agree with the prompt that repre...
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Line 1, column 515, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...d desires are rational and sustainable. I will be expressing this agreement with ...
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Line 3, column 666, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun election seems to be countable, so consider using: '2023 elections'.
Suggestion: 2023 elections
...tively, look at Nigeria in the previous 2023 election, where no one is certain how the number...
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Line 3, column 899, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: many
...ing events where court cases, riots and many many more. Thus, in not doing the will of th...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 10, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...ation of rights in Nigeria. However, I do concede that the request of the peop...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, so, thus, whereas, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 19.5258426966 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 33.0505617978 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2681.0 2235.4752809 120% => OK
No of words: 539.0 442.535393258 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97402597403 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81833721656 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7126892917 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 272.0 215.323595506 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504638218924 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 830.7 704.065955056 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.5692520316 60.3974514979 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.75 118.986275619 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.82142857143 5.21951772744 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259467671906 0.243740707755 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0634923948008 0.0831039109588 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558968193572 0.0758088955206 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150633544229 0.150359130593 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312877583464 0.0667264976115 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 14.1392134831 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 131.0 100.480337079 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 312, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...is as complex as it is straightforward. I mostly agree with the prompt that repre...
^
Line 1, column 515, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...d desires are rational and sustainable. I will be expressing this agreement with ...
^
Line 3, column 666, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun election seems to be countable, so consider using: '2023 elections'.
Suggestion: 2023 elections
...tively, look at Nigeria in the previous 2023 election, where no one is certain how the number...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 899, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: many
...ing events where court cases, riots and many many more. Thus, in not doing the will of th...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 10, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...ation of rights in Nigeria. However, I do concede that the request of the peop...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, so, thus, whereas, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 19.5258426966 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 33.0505617978 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2681.0 2235.4752809 120% => OK
No of words: 539.0 442.535393258 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97402597403 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81833721656 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7126892917 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 272.0 215.323595506 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504638218924 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 830.7 704.065955056 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.5692520316 60.3974514979 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.75 118.986275619 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.82142857143 5.21951772744 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259467671906 0.243740707755 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0634923948008 0.0831039109588 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558968193572 0.0758088955206 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150633544229 0.150359130593 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312877583464 0.0667264976115 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 14.1392134831 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 131.0 100.480337079 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.