Space exploration requires vast sums of money. Is the amount of money spent on space research justifiable?
It is a common belief that it will cost a huge amount of money to conduct space exploration. From my perspective, although discovering outer space requires allocating an enormous budget on this field, the result will be worth what has been spent.
To begin with, the most outstanding advantage of space exploration is to contribute to the advancement of communication. With the creation of satellites for space exploration, it will facilitate individuals to access the internet more conveniently which allows people to connect to more people from distinctive regions and develop either national and international relationships. Not only that, GPS services that are generated from satellites also help people to navigate the location of their opponent who they are talking to precisely and this factor can be considered to be crucial in some situations such as sending gifts or finding addresses.
Furthermore, space discovery also assists in providing information for some geographical majors, specifically weather forecasts which are essential to humans in some circumstances. Weather forecast is basically known as a program that predicts how the weather will happen and this plays a significant role in protecting humans from getting into conflict when some inferior phenomenon occurs such as hurricane, tornado and tsunami. These phenomenon have negative impact on both human and economic status because they will destroy a myriad of infrastructure including houses, road system and natural habitat and human can even die or get lost when the aforementioned natural disasters happen, so weather forecast will enable people to be more well-prepared when facing up to natural disasters and alleviate the damage which will help to economize effectively.
In conclusion, space exploration brings a variety of benefits for human life such as supporting people to develop their relationship with more people from different areas and preventing people from being damaged by natural disasters. Thus, space exploration needs more investment to support people in some aspect of life.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 432, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this phenomenon' or 'These phenomena', 'These phenomenons'?
Suggestion: This phenomenon; These phenomena; These phenomenons
...such as hurricane, tornado and tsunami. These phenomenon have negative impact on both human and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, thus, well, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1771.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.56918238994 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06906800746 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594339622642 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 565.2 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 97.6926302236 49.4020404114 198% => OK
Chars per sentence: 177.1 106.682146367 166% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.8 20.7667163134 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147697460078 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0828488357929 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770230507633 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113584581367 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0854736150229 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.7 13.0946893788 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.09 50.2224549098 46% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.62 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.49 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 432, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this phenomenon' or 'These phenomena', 'These phenomenons'?
Suggestion: This phenomenon; These phenomena; These phenomenons
...such as hurricane, tornado and tsunami. These phenomenon have negative impact on both human and ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, thus, well, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1771.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.56918238994 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06906800746 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594339622642 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 565.2 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 97.6926302236 49.4020404114 198% => OK
Chars per sentence: 177.1 106.682146367 166% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.8 20.7667163134 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147697460078 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0828488357929 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770230507633 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113584581367 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0854736150229 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.7 13.0946893788 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.09 50.2224549098 46% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.62 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.49 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.