It is true that a balanced diet plays an important role in people’s health. While many people think that the government’s duty is to ensure a good diet for residents, I believe that both governments and individuals should be responsible for their diet meals.
On the one hand, there are a variety of reasons why everyone should take their own account for their daily meals. Firstly, people all have the right to decide what kinds of diet they want to follow. In Vietnam, for example, the vast majority of people have a vegetarian diet, in which people do not eat meat and they all eat vegetables or fruits instead. However, it is important for human’s body to absorb enough nutrients such as protein and all kind of vitamins in order to meet their energy needs for daily activities. Secondly, citizens are those who go to market or supermarket to buy foods for themselves instead of authorities, so they need to think carefully about its energy before making their decision.
On the other hand, the role of the authority in controlling their citizens’ diet also cannot be underestimated. One reason is that governments have a strong power to decide what kinds of foods can be consumed. For example, if authorities could ban unhealthy foods which cause several health issues, people would have a healthy eating habit. This is likely to enhance the quality of life. In addition, there is no doubt that governments are working for residents because of their benefits. It is more beneficial if the governments encourage or promote people to have a healthy diet through events or campaigns. They could spread the important role of diet in people’s lifestyle, especially young people who are not mature enough to decide which diets are healthier.
In conclusion, it seems to me that both governments and residents should be equally responsible for their balanced diet.
- Studies show that many criminals have a low of education For this reason people that the best way to reduce crime is to educate people in prison so they can ge a job when leave prison Do you agree or disagree 67
- Some people think that everyone has the right to have access to university education, and that government should make it free for all students no matter what financial background they have.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 84
- Topic: Some people think that the government has the duty to ensure that its citizens have a healthy diet, while others believe this is individuals' responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 73
- Task 2: Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people. Why is this the case and what can be done to attract more local people to visit these places? 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'play'?
Suggestion: play
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ts energy before making their decision. On the other hand, the role of the autho...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, no doubt, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1579.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02866242038 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88251748565 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535031847134 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0993211358 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.266666667 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9333333333 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261432339808 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0957203493235 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753344474541 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180114983356 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0940637885539 0.056905535591 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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