Food plays a paramount role in everybody’s life. With the use of improved and better machinery, the production is much more cheap for food. Other methods can be determintal for human health and have negative effects on local communities. In this essay, I will discuss both advantages and disadvantages and also explain how demerits outweigh its merits.
Firstly, the main benefit for food production, It will increase productivity. For instance, with the help of more production of the food, most of the countries will buy the products from our country and that will further enhance international business and it will also lead to the development of our economy. Second advantageous for food production, we can have modified food basket. Additionally, scientists created new fertilizers that certainly made the growing process faster. These unnatural innovation dramatically improved production processes. The price of food will also decrease and as a result, people can buy more food for the same amount of money.
On the othe hand, these advantages do not overweight drawbacks because people’s health have significantly being suffered from these new technological innovations. For instance, according to the recent statistics, the more people use fertilizers to grow the food, the more individuals suffer cancer. Furthermore, many babies were born with the disabilities that might be due to diet of their parents, particularly the quality of the food. Another disadvantage for food production, the wastage of natural resources. In addition, more machines are needed for production of food and this will consume massive electricity to run the machines. However, it will also increase the environmental pollution for producting huge amount of food in the industry.
To recapitulate, there is no doubt that there is a possibility of food production by using modern machines and new fertilizers. However, the quality of food dramatically decreases when people use these new modern improvements. I believe that the fast production of food can not make people benefit from it. Moreover, these may bring only disadvantages for people, for example, more individuals suffering from cancer.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
Food plays an paramount important role in everybody&a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, for example, for instance, in addition, no doubt, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1874.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52802359882 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16075285243 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53982300885 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 587.7 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.8912588865 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.95 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301393666273 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103905344904 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0878912484576 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218379823332 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0976830108093 0.056905535591 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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