Although more and more people read news on the internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. Do you agree or disagree?
It is sometimes argued that newspapers will keep the first position as the most essential source of news regardless of there is an increase in the number of people who get news on the Internet. In my opinion, this view is not satisfied and I totally disagree with it.
On the one hand, online news is preferable because it has some significant advantages. Firstly, we will always keep track of the latest current affair because news, events, and pictures are updated hourly on the websites. To get that convenience, the way of an article, a magazine or a newspaper which are published online is relatively distinct from the conventional way due to the absence of printing, delivering and selling steps. Secondly, the development of the Internet has brought about a huge revolution in different aspects of life and this makes online news more and more accessible. Indeed, a smart phone or a laptop which is extremely user-friendly can connect to the Internet instantly and facilitate up-to-date online news to spread to all people at any time.
On the other hand, the conventional newspaper has several drawbacks. One of them is the cost, which has been pushed up gradually beyond the reach of low income families. For example, the price of a daily newspaper such as Tuoi Tre has been gone up from three thousand dong to eight thousand dong, so a monthly expense for this newspaper is two hundred and forty thousand dong, which can make lots of families consider. Another issue is environmental concerns, which have been aware of in recent years. We all know that paper is made from wood and in order to produce a sufficient amount of paper for the newspaper industry, millions of trees were cut down and that causes a devastating effect on the environment.
In conclusion, I appreciate the role of online news in changing the way to get information and do not believe that conventional newspapers can stand as the most essential source of news.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1615.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84984984985 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79133288718 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552552552553 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.8917369959 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.230769231 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6153846154 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53846153846 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272064106929 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0896021351415 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0923983636401 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186882796664 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0886791973194 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.