Some people believe that study is important to success, others say there is no relation between study and success. Discuss both views and give your own opinion?
Education spread democratic idea and value. It is thought by some people that, study plays an vital role to achieve success in life. Whereas, other think that there is no connection between study and success. Here, I would like to discuss both views in the upcoming paragraph and give my own perception.
There are manifold points to shore-up first and foremost, study play magnificent role to uplift the standard of human being. For example, study provide a great deal of knowledge in different fields. Such as medical,engineering,agriculture. Because study act as a steping stone to scale the height of success. Moreover, massive number of students join vocational courses. Where they learn skills to operate technical machines. Which provide them optimum opportunities to do work in industries and factories to earn bread and butter. Which brings joy and prosperity in their life.
On the other hand, Many people have exceptional talent instead of study skills. For example, some people are good at acting,singing and sports like Gurdas maan, Dhirubhai Ambani, Virender Sehwag and many more are born once in a blue moon and become successful in the world. Furthermore, some per portion of people take birth silver spoon in their moth. For example, In business, agriculture as a gift from their ancestors.
From my own opinion, Both sides have their own significance. But according to me study is more crucial for every individuals to show their exceptional talent and earn name and fame to find supreme outcomes.
To recapitulate, In these factors study have their own importance behind success. So that, people can toil hard in their life. Which is beyond comparison to live aristocratic lifestyle.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 92, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...hought by some people that, study plays an vital role to achieve success in life. ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , engineering
...dge in different fields. Such as medical,engineering,agriculture. Because study act as a ste...
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Message: “Where” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...er of students join vocational courses. Where they learn skills to operate technical ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , singing
... example, some people are good at acting,singing and sports like Gurdas maan, Dhirubhai ...
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Line 9, column 128, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...at, people can toil hard in their life. Which is beyond comparison to live aristocrat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, whereas, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23636363636 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13123216578 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632727272727 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.1885337825 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.5714285714 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0952380952 20.7667163134 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350820943225 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.087416481154 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0974838635527 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192847658863 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112431173976 0.056905535591 198% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.22 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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