What do you think is the most important invention for the past 100 years，antibiotics, airplane, or computers? And why?
These days, there is an ongoing debate between people about the most important innovation antibiotics, computer or airplane in past century. Some people are either passionate supporters of all inventions or some are opponents. They may have empirical and theoretical agreements and disagreements; my view is that computer is most important invention in past decades.
There are several reasons why computer is most important invention? while other inventions have significant importance too . As we all aware, 20th century was an era of creative inventions in which computer is the most valuable and important.; moreover , can`t imagine our life with computers in current era. In other words, all inventions are working on computer based programs: For example , airplanes are based on engines and navigation systems but these systems are operated with the support of computers.
Furthermore, computer plays an important roles in various sectors where human job is risky: for example, mining and space programs. In other word, computers play a most important role in developing human life and future research ventures. Lets take an example of electric cars . As pollution problem is serious concern worldwide as almost 70 % of world`s pollution , automobiles are responsible. The only solution is electric cars which are creating zero pollution norms , working on computers , moreover, this invention will be helpful for human race in future.
Although, antibiotics and airplane are important inventions in past 100 years but computers changed the whole world through its usage in every gadget even in airplane and antibiotics. i will rate the computer as best invention among the antibiotics and airplanes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, while, for example, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 10.5418719212 180% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1457.0 1207.87684729 121% => OK
No of words: 261.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.58237547893 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96248243062 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 139.433497537 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597701149425 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 379.143842365 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8062060718 50.4703680194 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.071428571 104.977214359 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6428571429 20.9669160288 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35714285714 7.25397266985 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.33497536946 300% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 6.9802955665 172% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343817689758 0.242375264174 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12436526529 0.0925447433944 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0891580021862 0.071462118173 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213366187482 0.151781067708 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459977613891 0.0609392437508 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 53.1260098522 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 11.5310837438 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 55.0591133005 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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