Some people think law changes human behavior. Do you agree or disagree?
These days, there is ongoing debate between people that human behavior is affected by law. Some people seem to be either passionate supporters or some seem to be opponents. They may have theoretical or empirical agreements and disagreements; my view is that advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
There are several reason why laws affects human behavior ? One of them is that every human brain`s has different tendency to think and learn. The origin of laws from ancient times to today`s with their prospective is that to control the crime ratio in society ; However, laws or rules may be vary from one country to another. Lets take an comparison example of middle east with India, moreover, type of governments are different from each other . Furthermore, In middle east, there is a provision of death penalty for rape and murder crimes . while in India, due to more complex judicial system, penalty process will take years. As a result , the crime ratio least and high in both regions respectively.
Furthermore, crime and strong laws are opponent to each other. In other words, the countries with strict rules against crimes , the rate of murder, robbery and rape is low as compare to countries with flexible rules. To add up, human tendency to do crime is decreased with strict laws.
In my words , human behavior is directly affected by strong laws and rules.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, while, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 5.75862068966 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1151.0 1207.87684729 95% => OK
No of words: 227.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0704845815 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72444863268 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 139.433497537 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594713656388 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.6788395528 50.4703680194 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.2142857143 104.977214359 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2142857143 20.9669160288 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64285714286 7.25397266985 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.33497536946 169% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 2.75862068966 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210563229335 0.242375264174 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777536381087 0.0925447433944 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.082022417776 0.071462118173 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139850287488 0.151781067708 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541265444529 0.0609392437508 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 12.6369458128 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.1260098522 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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