Some organizations integrate employees in decision making process of their goods and services. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this.
These days, there is ongoing debate between people that involvement of employees in decision making of organization`s goods and services is productive or not. Some are either passionate supporters or some are opponents. They may have empirical and theoretical agreements and disagreements;my view is that advantages overweight disadvantages.
There are several reasons why employees involvement in decision making process is beneficial for goods and products? The main reason is that employees under stand the root cause of any problem . In other words, with the practical involvement and experience employees understand the situation at a ground level. Lets take an example of Japanese car giant car manufacturer Toyota . This leading car company promotes his employees to do Kaizens ( means continues improvement). Moreover, with the spot of small ideas they are continuously improve their workplace and leads to improve the quality of production and process.
This fact is true that small changes can do a big changes. Knowledge and practice can makes a man perfect. Today , many companies are integrate their workers to make their products better and quality oriented. This leads to build trust trust between management and employees . The implementation of this factor is improved their skills while on the other hand , positive environment will be created in work place. Most important , the financial revenue of organization will increase .
In my terms, integration of employees in decision making process definitely improve products and services on an organization. In practice is beneficial for both employees and employer. As a result , this activity will create a healthy working environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
may, moreover, so, while, as a result, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 5.75862068966 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 1207.87684729 120% => OK
No of words: 257.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.64591439689 5.00649968141 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18425281693 2.71678728327 117% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610894941634 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 379.143842365 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6551724138 142% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.0644360363 50.4703680194 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.6111111111 104.977214359 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2777777778 20.9669160288 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.25397266985 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.33497536946 356% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 6.9802955665 186% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350378068691 0.242375264174 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0931286042935 0.0925447433944 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684910825195 0.071462118173 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206257928121 0.151781067708 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0167650464286 0.0609392437508 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 53.1260098522 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.9 11.5310837438 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 55.0591133005 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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