Nowadays animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines and to test the safety of other products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer, while others are in favour of
Animal’s trials of a new drug before marketing is a common practice by pharmaceutical companies in order to ensure that human will remain safe from the side effect of this drug. Many people often viewed it as cruelty to this living creature and raise their voice against this test. However, others believe this approach is not unethical and they vote for it. I complete agree that animal experiment should stop as it linked to pain and suffering to them.
Animals kingdom are the part of our ecological system. Animal’s contribution to human civilization is immense from the ancient world and it is believed that this trend will continue. In addition, animals are beings used for the domestic and commercial purpose that facilitate our comfort living and promote economic growth. They deserve respectful behavior and caring attitude. However, it is evident that animals are not treated properly by the human being. Pharmaceutical companies spend billion dollars for research to get patent for a medicine and it involves numerous steps before releasing into the market. Researcher ensures the safety net of a new drug by testing it on animals whether they developed any serious adverse reaction or not. Animals are quarantine for this purpose for long period and this causes huge suffering to them even death.
Multinational drug producing companies convinced that this is the only scientific method that can certify the medicine as safe to consume. Surprisingly, there are ample of evidence of severe drug reaction across the world of a tested drug despite this painstaking and cumbersome procedure. In addition, genetic constitution of animals and human being are not identical. Therefore a drug which is safe to the experimenting animals may not safe to the human being. The side effects of a drug also depend on dose and the route it is administered and other co-morbid condition. These are reasons why the authenticity of experiencing on animals is being questioned by the supporter who want to stop this practice.
In conclusion, human has developed a symbiotic relationship with animals. It is not uncommon that exotic animals have become friends of the human being. It is our responsibility to treat them properly without any exploitation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 495, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a billion'.
Suggestion: a billion
...n being. Pharmaceutical companies spend billion dollars for research to get patent for ...
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Line 3, column 371, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...mals and human being are not identical. Therefore a drug which is safe to the experimenti...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1898.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21428571429 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89966768726 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541208791209 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 619.2 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.7485297165 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.380952381 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.61904761905 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220947149832 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671190825109 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472061058575 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130148460942 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446784193428 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.