You recently bought a piece of equipment for your kitchen but did not work. You phoned the shop but no action was taken.
Write a letter to the shop manager. In your letter
1. Describe the problem with the equipment
2. Explained what happened when you phoned the shop
3. Say what you would want the manager to do
Write at least 150 words
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to let you know that the brand new microwave I bought from your store in Down Town Beach last week is not functional.
I bought the appliance to easily warm up cooked food but unfortunately, it did not serve its purpose for even once. At the store, the equipment seems to work properly but when I brought it home that was not the case. Firstly, I heard a loud sound inside and then later smoke starts to ooze out of it. I think there might be a short circuit. As of now, the power light cannot be switched on.
Let me explain what happened when I called the customer service to report the problem. I called for over one hour and no one bothered to pick up and when one lady finally did, she promised to send a technician with a replacement immediately but until now no action.
Even though I have known that the store always strive to give its customers the best but unfortunately, I am exceedingly displeased with the quality of the product I purchased and the service given to me. There should be improvements on how customer service department handle customers and I also need a replacement by tomorrow afternoon.
I am expecting to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.
Yours faithfully,
Martin Oben.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 85, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ys strive to give its customers the best but unfortunately, I am exceedingly disp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, so, then, i think, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1044.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 226.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61946902655 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68270070567 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646017699115 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9188975908 44.8134815571 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8333333333 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 4.34317383033 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195156122513 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061998567943 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535023718939 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0994693001033 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507105090706 0.0580467560999 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.