In some countries, few people
In few countries, individuals earn hefty sum of money by doing their own business or job. Whereas, some perportion of masses considered that this would be better for a country. While, other think that administration should restrict on their salaries which they earn. Here, I would like to discuss both views and share my own opinion.
To begin with, many people earn hefty sum of money due to their hard work. For example, they toil hard to achieve massive success in their life but also they pay tax to government from their earning money. As a result, it helps the country to boost their economy level. Moreover, by earning lots of money they also make name and fame of that country. To ex amplify, they put their heart and soul and progress by leaps and bounds to scale the height of success. In result, it uplift the standard of the country.
On the flip side, authority have control their salary by which they provide optimum opportunity for an employment to needy people. For example, they can earn bread and butter by working under administration and fulfill their desires. As a result, it should be worthwhile for the society as well as government. Last but not the least, by reducing their salary it would be a better step to wipe away the relation of poor people and rich masses. For instance, they live in a same society and given equal importance to each other. In result, it bring joy and prosperity in their life.
To conclude, it is vividly said that, every coin has two sides. But according to me to reduce the high salaries of people and provide jobs to poor individuals which is beyond comparison.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 178, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...hat this would be better for a country. While, other think that administration should...
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Line 3, column 476, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'uplifts'?
Suggestion: uplifts
...le the height of success. In result, it uplift the standard of the country. On the ...
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Line 5, column 542, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'brings'?
Suggestion: brings
...importance to each other. In result, it bring joy and prosperity in their life. To...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, well, whereas, while, for example, for instance, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1339.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68181818182 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43797576989 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56993006993 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.0237901606 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.3888888889 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8888888889 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.44444444444 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0931516486705 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0268891516936 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481630518173 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0612823608529 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446089431002 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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