Study and employment distract one from another. To what extent do you think the statements are realistic? Support your opinion with examples?
Recently, the phenomenon the Study and employment distract one from another and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that the matter of having considerable knowledge is highly beneficial, such issue is regarded thoroughly constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals, I believe that having extensive experience can be a plus, and I will analyse that throughout this essay.
From a social standpoint, employment exerting a profound influence on one's study can provide the society with some noticeable effect which is rooted in the fact that better learning as well as boosting mental acumen, are inextricably bound up. According to my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic research which discovered mental ability. Thus, beneficial ramifications of study skill and better learning skills apparently can be seen.
Within the realm of science, a combination of employment and study might increase consequences of wandering attention. Moreover, fundamental aspects of waving concentration would relate to this reality that demerits of decreasing one's productivity pertain to lower natural learning. As a tangible example, some academic research undertaken by a prestigious university has asserted that downside of wasting time is correlated negatively to increasing mass unemployment. Hence, it is correct to presume preconceived notion of dismissal of workers.
To conclude, while there are compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that merits of effective learning outweigh its demerits. Not only do the advantages of improving one's learning would prove the significance of different method of learning but also pinpoint higher education implications
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-12-01 | Alireza.r.68 | 88 | view |
| 2019-08-24 | 3pid | 88 | view |
| 2019-05-28 | zjaved | 88 | view |
| 2019-05-01 | bashirheidari | 88 | view |
| 2019-04-10 | zjaved | 77 | view |
- Violence portrayed on TV and in the movies leads to an increase in crime in our society. People who watch violent movies are more likely to become criminals. Do you agree or disagree? 77
- If you are assigned to work on a study on climate change, what will you choose to focus on and why? 11
- In a cashless society, people use more credit cards. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this phenomenon? 88
- In a cashless society, people use more credit cards. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this phenomenon? 85
- music is as important as other subjects in school to promote learning in children life 85
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 231, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...his reality that demerits of decreasing ones productivity pertain to lower natural l...
^^^^
Line 7, column 121, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to outweigh'
Suggestion: to outweigh
...lieve that merits of effective learning outweigh its demerits. Not only do the advantage...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 184, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...Not only do the advantages of improving ones learning would prove the significance o...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1207.87684729 125% => OK
No of words: 261.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.79310344828 5.00649968141 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22781870335 2.71678728327 119% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 139.433497537 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.580463131201 115% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 379.143842365 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.1953733232 50.4703680194 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.454545455 104.977214359 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7272727273 20.9669160288 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.25397266985 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133981946104 0.242375264174 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0467614460805 0.0925447433944 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597069945958 0.071462118173 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.07116291182 0.151781067708 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0252277142165 0.0609392437508 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 12.6369458128 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 53.1260098522 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.6 11.5310837438 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.31 8.32886699507 136% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 55.0591133005 196% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.94827586207 191% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.