There has been an increase in the number of homeless people all around the world.
What are the causes of it?
Advancement in Technology, increase in population, improvement in human lifestyle and the way of living has many pros and cons. Among them one commonly prevailing throughout the globe is homelessness. In this essay, I will examine the numerous causes behind the homelessness and apropos remedial solutions.
People are confronting the severe problem of homelessness due to unemployment, social discriminations, globalization, unequal distribution of resources, population growth, wars and natural disasters. In the underdeveloping country, it is hard for occupants to find the suitable opportunities due to the lack of industries and other businesses. Because of that, residents of underdeveloping countries travel to developing nations to have better career options. In this regards, fewer people will succeed, while others remain jobless and become homeless in foreign countries. However, by contrast, this scenario is different for the resident of developed countries who prefer to visit overseas countries instead of constructing a comfortable residence for themselves in their homeland. In addition, older people are facing severe the severe problem of homelessness because their offsprings don not have enough money to support the large family. As a result, they leave their parent at old age house and it is even disappointing to old people to feel alone and lack of social carelessness.
Above all, the war and natural disaster are considered major causes of homeless along with imparting severe economic deficit to the country. As ware displaces the people from their homes turns them into refugee camps. Similarly, natural disasters such as earthquakes and floods forced people to relocate their residency, in other words, it results in homelessness. Another common cause of homelessness is social discrimination in which you are unable to buy a home for yourself due to previous misconduct in the society. To overcome the problem of homelessness many nations all over the world are planning to dwindle the miseries of unemployment, discrimination, tension among the nations and confront the natural disasters effectively.
To sum up, I think that the government and non-government organization should take responsibilities to identify and mitigate the miseries of homelessness at all ages in the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 464, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...tions to have better career options. In this regards, fewer people will succeed, whi...
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Line 5, column 142, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...severe economic deficit to the country. As ware displaces the people from their ho...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, similarly, so, while, i think, in addition, such as, as a result, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1976.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.66189111748 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32291511266 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581661891117 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 627.3 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3943968883 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.5 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8125 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8125 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187763127356 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0564120773488 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404914291982 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106044173519 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402729365668 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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