The argument is primarily concerned with two major points i.e. Profit of Braeburn Corporation and health of people consuming their products. It depends on quality and popularity of products.
From a profit point of view, It is definitely going to increase if a manufacturer is good at quality throughout. Let's take an example of Burts Protein Products. It had the highest sales during the years 2008 to 2010. Afterward, It started to compromise with quality which led people to reduce consumption of their products and eventually they had to stop selling the same. So, good quality must be maintained along with getting profit.
If we look from another point, people are concerned about their health and cancer is a major issue nowadays. Soy products are good for health which can reduce chances of cancer. But, many people might not be aware of benefits of soy contributing in decease like cancer. So, awareness of the same is required to get people known factors of soy which might improve their sales.
So, to improve sales of the company, they should include awareness ideas and maintain a quality of products.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.6327345309 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.9520958084 39% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 11.1786427146 45% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 13.6137724551 22% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 28.8173652695 42% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 55.5748502994 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 16.3942115768 18% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 937.0 2260.96107784 41% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 187.0 441.139720559 42% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01069518717 5.12650576532 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 4.56307096286 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58901963632 2.78398813304 93% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 204.123752495 53% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577540106952 0.468620217663 123% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 705.55239521 40% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.76447105788 11% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 19.7664670659 61% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 22.8473053892 66% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.2450320809 57.8364921388 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.0833333333 119.503703932 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5833333333 23.324526521 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.41666666667 5.70786347227 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.25449101796 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.20758483034 73% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210984218432 0.218282227539 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0778758708947 0.0743258471296 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528521684237 0.0701772020484 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126844031374 0.128457276422 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507762909294 0.0628817314937 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 14.3799401198 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 48.3550499002 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 12.197005988 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.5979740519 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.32208582834 100% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 98.500998004 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 12.3882235529 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.1389221557 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.9071856287 67% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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