You cannot go to a company where you got an offer. Write a letter to the HR supervisor to
1- Explain the reason why you decline the offer
2- Express you gratitude
3- Explain you like your current job very much
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to inform you that I will be unable to join your company from next month in Bangalore.
Although, the offer is already signed off, due to recent turn of events, I would not be able to honor my part of the deal. Moving to Bangalore was a great opportunity for me to reunite with my family as my wife is working in Bangalore. However, I do not want to jeopardize this chance because she is getting transferred to Pune by next month.
When I was informed about my selection for your company, it was one of the happiest days of my life as I have heard so many good things about the organization. Unfortunately, it is not possible for me to join this time. I want to thank entire recruitment team and express my deepest apology to everyone, especially Mr. Mohan who took my interview.
Besides, my current company has offered a promotion and this new position has the same exposure as I was supposed to get in your team. So, I am really excited about my new work here. I am extremely sorry that I could not join your firm.
I look forward to receiving your acknowledgement soon.
Yours faithfully,
Sandip Ramani
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- Many parents think that it is good to teach their children about money.Why do you think it is important to teach them the value of money?What are the ways that can help children learn about it? 73
- In some countries the number of shootings increase because many people have guns at home To what extent do you agree or disagree Give specific reasons and examples to support your answer 100
- You recently had an issue with water leaking at your rental property. Write a letter to your landlord to complain about the problem and say– When did it happen?– Describe the problem.– Suggest what could be done about it. 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, look, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 962.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53773584906 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6944327715 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632075471698 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0666801948 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.1666666667 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.16666666667 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0901820600763 0.216113520407 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.033117976396 0.0766984524023 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489990075516 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0630039761191 0.12726935374 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0700614510838 0.0580467560999 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.