Today, many children spend a lot of time playing computer games and less time on outdoor sports. Why, is it a positive or negative development.
While, using the electronic games has changed the pave of children lifestyle. Many offspring do amusement with the use of these games. However, they don't like to play the outdoor games. It is a negative the trend of indoor games distracting children from outdoor activities.
On the one side, accessing the computer games brings the new change for their life. Because of, these games are design in modern style. Which is influence to children for playing the games. Also, there are several types of games available on the internet. Such as, action, puzzle and some related to their study. It boost their knowledge for different skills. Owing to, computer games become the challenge for kids. The majority of the people, it is best way to uplift the standard of their career. Moreover, nowadays parents does not allow to their kids for playing the outdoor activities. An account of, children not make physical fitness. They can only gain their knowledge. Also, the rate of crime increasing day by day.
On the flip side, sporting the games at the home it is a good way to spend time with family. Because, many indoor games are playing together due to they can strong bonding with parents. In these games, they can tackle many obstacles in different levels. However, the trend of indoor games disappearing the outdoor activities. Also, most of the time kids keep not fit healthy and it belongs suffer from many diseases. Such as eye sight impact, heart attack etcetera. Moving further, offspring are forgetting the traditional games. Because, indoor games has take the place of outdoor games.
To conclude, playing the outdoor and indoor games can make the strong body and mind for children. With the use of computer games, parents can also encourage to their children for play the outdoor sports. In spite of playing outdoor games, children can get optimum opportunity to show their hidden talent.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, while, such as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1588.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99371069182 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36947546659 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506289308176 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 16.0721442886 168% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 19.7466115931 49.4020404114 40% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 58.8148148148 106.682146367 55% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.7777777778 20.7667163134 57% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.22222222222 7.06120827912 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265477672467 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0726261620851 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567458121584 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17820055207 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038516476556 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 13.0946893788 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 50.2224549098 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.77 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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