In this technical era most of the children spend his lecture time to playing a computer game and less time to spend in outdoor activities or physical games, as a my opinion a computer games and physical games both have it's own pros and cons. Moreover, both topic have discusse in forthcoming paragraphs.
In this paragraph, I will throw some light on the constractive facet of perspective. The predominant one is now a days many childrens expends squander most of his time to play computer games. Because of that children face a lots of physical problems like obesity and fateners. To epitome, a survey conducted by Times of India reported that 60 percent children are preferred to play computer game as compare to outdoor activities. For example, one of my nephew is played computer games almost 3 to 4 hours per day and in this time his suffering to obesity as well as some health related problems.
On the flip side, the effacious has some cynical too. The children play computer games to increase his communication skill as well as take will new people everyday. To elaborate, the children take with many different people which belong to different state or city and communicate each other. An author one, in the physical or sport game limited persons and limited area available to play games. Furthermore, the weather Condition an effect to play outdoor activity and do not play sport in any were and any time. For example, in COVID pendemic time our society people played cricket everyday. One of them was infected of COVID-19 and after a few days 4 to 5 children get a positive report.
Thus wrap up discussion, both these own pros and cons. The physical or outdoor activity or games are and computer games both have useful for children devlopment and it is logically exceptable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, so, thus, well, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82792207792 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66121888118 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525974025974 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3950428386 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.9375 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.405188295278 0.244688304435 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12072754559 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101285971137 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247735350848 0.151304729494 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0727683889722 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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