A person you know is planning to move to your town. What do you think this person would like and dislike about living in your town? Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay
Seeking for a better place to live is the habit of all living organisms. All of us look for a place where we can live calm, safe and happy. The town I live is the place I born and grew up where all of my memories collected. If someone I know is going to move around my town, I can guarantee my relative to live much exciting and happy that he/she may witness the most enjoyable times in here.
Long time ago one of my close friends told me that how difficult to migrate from one place to another which makes her like she is separating away from all of her precious things including friends, favorite shop to buy an ice cream and hiding place where she likes hanging out. Indisputably, there is always little regret when moving to strange place. However, as long as you are coming close to me, the place full of friends including me, we can spend our spare time together. As I am planning, we can live much more inspirational by working out together and sitting outside and talking about anything we want.
Regardless of your boogeyman, I can proudly say that you will fell happier than ever before because of the kind neighbors, quiet surroundings and me. There are everything that is needed to make you feel happy. Even though you are new to this place, every single person in this town will be glad to talk to you. Also, the tranquil park can be the best place to rest outside while listening the birds tweeting and water pouring from fountain. Additionally, I can be the one who is always available to help when you are in a difficult situation.
Nowadays, people tend to choose the place where they live depending on many factors. Once the friend of mine is moving around my town, I can promise you that you will spend the most explosive and cheerful days in here. Both the surroundings and neighbors are the good reason to stay with. I want you to move in here without confusing to start the radiant days together.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, may, so, while, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1572.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 353.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45325779037 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37941453453 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560906515581 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.762499953 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4705882353 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7647058824 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.17647058824 5.45110844103 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198939757821 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0655088631426 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539620342542 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122542104095 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511252632083 0.0645574589148 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.53 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 86.8835125448 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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