The world natural resources are consumed at an ever-increased rate. What are the dangers of this situation? What should we do?
In recent years, consuming the world natural resources has increasingly become a popular issue all over the world. This essay will look at some dangers of this situations and offer some possible solutions to this problem.
There are the number of dangers which will certainly happen if the natural resources are run out. The first danger is that when they are destroyed, this will affect the standard of humans living. Human beings will get the risk of different problems involved in health. For instance, when forests are destroyed by humans, it is obvious that it will affect directly to humans’ health. Forest are the habitats of humans, without forests, we would not be able to survive. Another danger is that it will affect the ecological environment. Nowadays, humans are killing millions of animals around the world for numerous purposes. This problem will lead to animals are a danger of extinction, in addition, many rare animals will likely to disappear. As a result, it will cause ecological imbalance.
Therefore, there are several actions that could be taken to mitigate the problem mentioned above. The first method is that the government need to impose some laws to deter people from hunting animals for food and fur as well as deter deforestation problem. Another solution is that the local authorities and the government need to have to raise people’s awareness of the importance of natural resources.
In conclusion, there are various dangers if humans use natural resources for bad purposes and appropriate measures can be implemented to tackle this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, so, therefore, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1334.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1906614786 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71743573872 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552529182879 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.5249460304 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.9333333333 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.86666666667 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181750658701 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627696952795 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678791775918 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132933079688 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104089948007 0.056905535591 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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