some people say that computer games are bad for children by all means. while others believe that these games are contributing to children development.
21st century has brought complete transition in free time activities of kids as now they indulge in playing video games rather than physical games. For instances the given topic asserts that what is impact on childern by electronic games; bad for children or contributing to children development ? I shall explore the dimensions of this topic through examples and assertions and shape up my opinion by the end.
On one side, there is a group of people who believe that video games are bad for toddler because it is effect to their physical and mental health. Digital gamee are promote sedentary lifestyle, and these lifestyle results unfavourable for kids. Children suffer from various types diseases such as: diabites, headache and backache, hypertension, joint pain, week immunity system and many more. sometime computer display effect on kids eyesight and they suffer from day blinder, night blinder, colur blinder and so on.
Contrary to this, there is a group of people who believe that digital games promote the growth of children, and it increase their Intelligent Quotient level significantly. In these types of games involve various levels and for clearity that much mind is required which is kind of mental exercise of brain. Moreover, such games are audio visual and it required multisense of children for multitasking.For example: Kids under 9 spend more than 2 hours a day on screens, report shows By Jacqueline Howard,CNN. As well as, few electronic games are provide knowledge about related to general knowledge, art, science, history and so on.
Neverthless, both the opinions, i believe that there is no single conlusion. computer games plays a vital role in development of children alternatively it is harmful regarding health of children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'promoted'.
Suggestion: promoted
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Suggestion: Sometime
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Message: Did you mean 'increases'?
Suggestion: increases
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, regarding, so, well, for example, for instance, kind of, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24113475177 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79545279089 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624113475177 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.5689636472 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.692307692 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6923076923 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30769230769 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352065415443 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11713090295 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0817405107498 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213621356504 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308286271747 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.