You visited a restaurant for a meal.You were served meat(non-veg) instead of vegetarian meal.You are very annoyed at this incident.Complain to the restaurant manager for the same.
In your letter
•explain your annoying experience
•describe the unprofessional attitude of the staff member
•tell what you want the management to do for you
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction about the service of your prominent restaurant.Actually,last Sunday,I visited this place with my family members to celebrate 31st marriage anniversary of my parents and we wanted to eat vegetarian diet but,your staff members served non vegetarian diet to us which was a terrible situation for us because we all are vegetarian.
In fact,I already told the staff members that it is a special day for my parents and I wanted to give a treat to my family members while they did not make an attention towards my words.Moreover,as I told you they served us non vegetarian diet and when we lodged a complaint about it then they behaved very rudely.Furthermore,I got fed up with the behaviour of staff members and we did not eat any meal at that place while they charged us a heavy amount of Rs.2500.
Now,I am demanding justice from you because that was the fault of your staff members and you Should take an immediate and stern action on them otherwise the reputation of your popular restaurant is on stake.
I would deeply appreciate you if you may make an attention towards this Matter so that your upcoming customers not face any problems.
Thanking you in advance
Your faithfully
Sandeep
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, then, while, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 32.9175257732 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1060.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93023255814 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16551182533 2.54303337028 124% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562790697674 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 323.1 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6804123711 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 16.3608247423 263% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 155.760842319 44.8134815571 348% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 212.0 76.5299724578 277% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 43.0 16.8248392259 256% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.2 4.34317383033 327% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245901029921 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151949942717 0.0766984524023 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0308468816157 0.0603063233224 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146554994828 0.12726935374 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0293051752832 0.0580467560999 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.3 8.37731958763 278% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 36.29 70.7449484536 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 7.45979381443 253% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.2 8.71597938144 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 8.62886597938 336% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.2 8.54432989691 225% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 19.0 8.15463917526 233% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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