You are temporarily moving to a new city for your job. You will be three months, and you would like to rent some accommodation for your stay. Write to an accommodation rental office. In your letter
Tell them how long you are staying
Describe the type of accommodation you would like
Explain what facilities you will need nearby
Dear sir or Madam,
I am writing in regard to renting an appropriate accommodation in your city, Newyork, for three months from March to May.
First of all, I want to say that my travel to your city is a business trip and I will be alone there. So that I am just looking for a small apartment which is in the less distance to downtown. I will only need a bedroom and independent bathroom. The kitchen is not essential for me because I will be so busy with my work and I would not have sufficient time to cook. But the elevator is extremely significant for me as I am unable to use stairs at all.
In addition, I prefer to have access to some facilities in less than 5 minutes such as a fully- equipped gym, shopping centres, famous restaurants, and a hospital. Particularly, I would really like to have easy access to the public transport. I would extremely grateful if you could find an accommodation with these features.
I look forward to receiving your response as soon as possible.
Kind Regards,
Sarah Smith
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| 2018-07-03 | Mehdi.Babaie | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 35, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'appropriate accommodation'.
Suggestion: appropriate accommodation
...m, I am writing in regard to renting an appropriate accommodation in your city, Newyork, for three months...
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Line 7, column 289, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'accommodation'.
Suggestion: accommodation
...ld extremely grateful if you could find an accommodation with these features. I look forward ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, may, really, so, in addition, such as, first of all, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 849.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56451612903 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79731652954 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.639784946237 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4726346433 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.1818181818 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9090909091 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.90909090909 4.34317383033 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266975812518 0.216113520407 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0788562377074 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660591006598 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143608969897 0.12726935374 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529583309159 0.0580467560999 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.