Everyone has a different point of view according to their knowledge and information. Based on the same, they support or oppose the statement. While some universal truths can't be opposed. So in that case, to convince readers, the author must support the statement. It is not necessary to oppose the statement. I disagree with the statement.
Consider the given argument as ' There should be the same curriculum nationwide till they enter in the college '. There are some advantages as well as disadvantages of the given statement. Some people support the statement mentioning that the same curriculum will maintain similarity in basic subjects and a child will adopt new environment easily. Also, each child will be treated equally. Other people might be on opposing side stating that a child will be uninterested towards foundation if given the same curriculum. Each child will have different interests. If the same curriculum is applied, it must include all type of subjects. That might decrease a child's ability to study and interest.
Some statements are universally accepted. We can take an example of ' Honesty is the best policy ' or ' A good book equals 100 good friends '. One cannot oppose these facts as these are accepted by everyone. To convince readers, the author must support the statement and state examples of the same. Readers might find a person boring who opposes this kind of statements.
Also, there are some statements which can't be accepted and the opposition is a must. These statements include ' Internet should be banned to decrease unwanted spreading of information '. The Internet is a great source of getting information. Selection of relevant information is based on readers. It is true that rumors are spreading through the internet widely but a ban is not a solution for the same. BAnning the internet will block many useful pieces of information.
In sum, it is not necessary to oppose the argument to convince readers. It depends on the of the argument and interest of readers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, while, kind of, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 58.6224719101 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 20.0 12.9106741573 155% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1680.0 2235.4752809 75% => OK
No of words: 329.0 442.535393258 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10638297872 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80165173271 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 215.323595506 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501519756839 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 704.065955056 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 23.0359550562 52% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.1767707366 60.3974514979 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 62.2222222222 118.986275619 52% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.1851851852 23.4991977007 52% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 5.21951772744 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14221768234 0.243740707755 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0477297174034 0.0831039109588 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592372869218 0.0758088955206 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0947942475575 0.150359130593 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450197159814 0.0667264976115 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 14.1392134831 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 48.8420337079 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 12.1743820225 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.47 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 100.480337079 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.8971910112 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 11.2143820225 61% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.