Do you support dangerous activities like extreme skiing? What are the reasons for that?
Recently, the phenomenon of extreme sports and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. Although many people assert that dangerous activities are highly beneficial, there are considerable numbers of individuals holding conflicting views. I am inclined to believe that the issue mentioned above play a crucial role in the success of every society, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
From a social standpoint, numerous reasons could be taken into account why I promote extreme sports. First and foremost is adrenalin correlated positively with self-confidence as well as making money and these factors are inextricably bound up with each other. According to my own experience, I perused the British Journal of psychology published a report in which it claims that lucrative sports and reducing depression will play a vital role regarding economic profits. Thus, beneficial ramifications of both interests and mental condition apparently can be seen.
Within the realm of science, there is no doubt that adventurous activities could have inevitable consequences as well. One persuasive argument is that it might lead to both mental problems and heart disease in addition to serious injuries. As a notable example, some scientific research undertaken by scholars of the prestigious university has indicated if had they have more accurate information in advance, they would have faced problems effectively. Hence, this subject could also bring dangers, addiction, and expensive facilities.
To conclude, while there is compelling evidence on both sides, I entirely agree that the benefits of dangerous activities outweigh its drawbacks. Not only do the advantages of vigorous exercises prove the significance of exciting sports, but also pinpoint sportsmanship implications.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, first, hence, if, regarding, so, thus, well, while, in addition, no doubt, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1544.0 1207.87684729 128% => OK
No of words: 269.0 242.827586207 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.73977695167 5.00649968141 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10527101693 2.71678728327 114% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 139.433497537 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.702602230483 0.580463131201 121% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 379.143842365 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5347199666 50.4703680194 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.769230769 104.977214359 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6923076923 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.30769230769 7.25397266985 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100771218619 0.242375264174 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0313056430856 0.0925447433944 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0366906979645 0.071462118173 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0581813872574 0.151781067708 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312264672563 0.0609392437508 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 12.6369458128 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 53.1260098522 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 10.9458128079 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.01 11.5310837438 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.73 8.32886699507 129% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 55.0591133005 189% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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