You have just returned from holiday and were not satisfied with your trip. Write to the travel agency. In your letter
Say where / when you went on holiday
Explain why you are not satisfied with your holiday
Tell them what you would like them to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing with regard to express my dissatisfaction with your customer service. I am one of your customers who took a package tour to Paris between the 5th and 12th of July. You recommended it as the best option in order to have an unforgettable holiday and I accepted your recommendation because of the reputation of your company's long successful experience in this field.
What I saw in this travel was totally different from your promises. First of all, the flight was the first class. As you know, I had paid for a business class. On top of this, when I arrived at Paris's airport, I was awaited for welcoming but no one came to welcome me for 2 hours. Therefore, I took a taxi and went to the hotel. But unfortunately, the hotel's building was incredibly old. In addition, the personnel's behaviour was really impolite and the room was terribly untidy and dirty. Finally, on the second day, I decided to move to another hotel which is my favourite.
As a result of these disappointing errors by your agency, I had to pay additional costs to have a seven- day holiday. I am requesting a complete refund of the fees I have been charged by your company.
I expect your prompt actions.
Kind Regards,
Sarah Smith
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing with regard to express my d...
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Line 5, column 406, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'personnels'' or 'personnel's'?
Suggestion: personnels'; personnel's
...ng was incredibly old. In addition, the personnels behaviour was really impolite and the r...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, really, second, so, therefore, as to, in addition, you know, as a result, first of all, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1033.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 222.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65315315315 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83892800453 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635135135135 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 324.0 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0980277971 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.8666666667 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46666666667 4.34317383033 195% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245556620212 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695225216754 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660116843971 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146828449395 0.12726935374 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0612003995471 0.0580467560999 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.