Some people say that the library can provide many books than electronic gadgets like computer and e- book these days. However, I strongly disagree with this view due to some well grounded reasons, which I shall discuss in the following paragraphs.
The first and foremost reason is that the library can not dispatch more books than online do, because computer is much faster than this. In other words, owing to latest technology it is quite easy to upload at any kind books within a short period of time, whereas the library take more time reach to the people. Consequently, many people rely on computer or e- books than printed books. Thus, this is clear that computer can provide many books very quickly rather than distributing from library.
Another justification is that the huge collection is not possible at library, this is due to the fact that they need more space on it.But in terms of computer, they have massive capacity to keep the books safe and secure. Furthermore, people also can choose any variety of books within a single click ,take Amazon kindle as an example, which has numerous books from moral story to fiction .Therefore, it is well clear that the different clollection of books and magazines are easily available on internet than in the library.
In conclusion, in this fast- paced era it is not possible to publish and provide through library .But with the help of computer not only dispatch rapidly but also can store more than library do.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, whereas, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1227.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86904761905 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40884129343 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575396825397 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.7695502419 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.333333333 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.6666666667 7.06120827912 194% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278709229747 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135588988757 0.084324248473 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0796727051217 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178977940409 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0755544602572 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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