Recent incursions by deep-sea fishermen into the habitat of the Madagascan shrimp have led to a significant reduction in the species population. With the breeding season fast approaching, the number of shrimp should soon begin to increase. Nonetheless, the population should not return to the levels before the fishing boats arrived. Because this trend is expected to continue over the next several years, the Madagascan shrimp will quickly become an endangered species.
The argument claims that the Madagascan shrimp will soon become an endangered species if the current trend continues. However, there are several evidences we need to look at in order to evaluate the validity of this argument.
First, we need a statistical data to really claim that the number of shrimp is indeed decreasing each year. By looking at the population trend of shrimp from previous years, we would be able to champion the argument that the trend is expected to continue over the next several years. If the trend showed rapid increase in shrimp population after decrease in shrimp population, the argument loses its credibility since we are expected to see rapid increase once again.
Moreover, since the breeding season is approaching fast, the change in shrimp population after the breeding season should be considered too. If the number of new-born shrimps after each breeding season are far greater than the decrease in shrimp population due to the incursion, shrimps would be become an endangered species and weaken the argument. Surely, scientists should also look at how many baby shrimps survive to become a full grown population after they are born to tell that the population would not experience significant reduction.
Finally, one should analyze whether the trend from recent incursion by deep-sea fisherman is expected to continue. If this was merely short-term trend that arose due to customers temporal liking of the Madagascan shrimp, the number of shrimps that fishermen catch would decrease as this trend disappears. Then, the shrimp population would continue to increase until they return to the normal level.
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Essay evaluation report
flaws:
No. of Words: 264 350
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 11 15
No. of Words: 264 350
No. of Characters: 1352 1500
No. of Different Words: 130 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.031 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.121 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.548 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 107 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 74 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 58 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 30 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 24 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.633 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.909 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.428 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.655 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.21 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, however, if, look, moreover, really, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.6327345309 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.9520958084 85% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 11.1786427146 9% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 13.6137724551 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 28.8173652695 56% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 55.5748502994 70% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 16.3942115768 91% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 2260.96107784 61% => OK
No of words: 264.0 441.139720559 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20454545455 5.12650576532 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.56307096286 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61040643638 2.78398813304 94% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 204.123752495 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503787878788 0.468620217663 108% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 705.55239521 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.76447105788 57% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 19.7664670659 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.8473053892 105% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.360769759 57.8364921388 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.909090909 119.503703932 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 23.324526521 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09090909091 5.70786347227 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 5.15768463074 19% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.25449101796 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.20758483034 61% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25494895174 0.218282227539 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108371695636 0.0743258471296 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622705728464 0.0701772020484 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25494895174 0.128457276422 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0628817314937 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 14.3799401198 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.3550499002 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.197005988 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.5979740519 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.32208582834 98% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 98.500998004 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 12.3882235529 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.1389221557 104% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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