The table below provides information on rental charges and salaries in three areas of London.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The table illustrates, the data on housing rent and salary which required to afford accommodation in main three areas of London. Units are measured in dollar.
Overall, Nottinghall, was the most costly area to get a rent house and needed salary. Whereas, the least wealthy area was Fulham in London.
As is observed, for one bed rental house has 375 dollar per week in Nottinghall, which is 50 dollar higher than Regents park while salary mentioned in figure such as, 98,500 and 85,500 dollar respectively in year, when, Fulham has mere 215 dollar with salary of 56,500 dollar yearly. However, two and three bed property account for 390 dollar (salary 102,500) and 600 dollar (salary 157,600) respectively in fulham.
Regarding weekly rental charge for two bed property was 450dollar in Regents park which is 25 dollar lower than Nottinghall, similarly, three bed with 650 and 738 dollar in each area. However, salary comprise for 2 bed which is 118,00 and 127,500 in same place, when three bed consist of 170,500 and 194,000 dollar yearly in Rogents park and Notti
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 87, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... to get a rent house and needed salary. Whereas, the least wealthy area was Fulham in L...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'dollars'.
Suggestion: dollars
...erved, for one bed rental house has 375 dollar per week in Nottinghall, which is 50 do...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'dollars'.
Suggestion: dollars
...ar per week in Nottinghall, which is 50 dollar higher than Regents park while salary m...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'dollars'.
Suggestion: dollars
...vely in year, when, Fulham has mere 215 dollar with salary of 56,500 dollar yearly. Ho...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...harge for two bed property was 450dollar in Regents park which is 25 dollar lower...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'dollars'.
Suggestion: dollars
... 450dollar in Regents park which is 25 dollar lower than Nottinghall, similarly, thre...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'dollars'.
Suggestion: dollars
..., similarly, three bed with 650 and 738 dollar in each area. However, salary comprise...
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Suggestion:
...larly, three bed with 650 and 738 dollar in each area. However, salary comprise f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, regarding, similarly, whereas, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 892.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98324022346 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43776504562 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581005586592 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.5561670216 43.030603864 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.5 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.375 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 5.23603664747 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137884052348 0.215688989381 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748420539148 0.103423049105 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466417555834 0.0843802449381 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100888912296 0.15604864568 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0289889581265 0.0819641961636 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.