Claim: Even though young people often receive the advice to “follow your dreams,” more emphasis should be placed on picking worthy goals.
Reason: Many people’s dreams are inherently selfish.
The goal is a part of dream, by small steps of achieving goals,you fulfill your dreams.so, dreams and goals have co relation between them.
The advice given to child should be, follow your dreams by making small goals towards achievement of your dream.The dream can be vague and amorphous. To crystalize the dream, we should follow steps to achieve it by making small temporary goals. From result of this goals, you can access that how far are you from your goal.
The person who is dreaming about becoming something, it is feeling and you should convert in to goal to achieve it in definite period of time. Dream has to be converted in relative goals to achieve a dream with a proper plan.The goal is subset of dreams.So, if some person's dream is selfish, the goals have to be aligned towards selfishness.
The goals are for short term, for definite period of time.It is smaller version of dreams. But, dreams are forever with you
The dreams should be divided in to goals for proper planning as well to track growth towards a achievement dream. Dream and goals are interrelated.so, if dream is selfish, then to achieve our dreams, we may make selfish goals and following the dreams are necessory as dream includes the goals.
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- Claim: Even though young people often receive the advice to “follow your dreams,” more emphasis should be placed on picking worthy goals.Reason: Many people’s dreams are inherently selfish. 33
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 63, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , you
...dream, by small steps of achieving goals,you fulfill your dreams.so, dreams and goal...
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Line 3, column 113, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...goals towards achievement of your dream.The dream can be vague and amorphous. To cr...
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Line 3, column 113, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...goals towards achievement of your dream.The dream can be vague and amorphous. To cr...
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Line 3, column 261, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...g small temporary goals. From result of this goals, you can access that how far are ...
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Line 5, column 128, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...rt in to goal to achieve it in definite period of time. Dream has to be converted in relative ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...s to achieve a dream with a proper plan.The goal is subset of dreams.So, if some pe...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
...roper plan.The goal is subset of dreams.So, if some persons dream is selfish, the ...
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...short term, for definite period of time.It is smaller version of dreams. But, drea...
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Line 7, column 124, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dreams. But, dreams are forever with you The dreams should be divided in to goals...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...lanning as well to track growth towards a achievement dream. Dream and goals are...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, then, well, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 58.6224719101 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1029.0 2235.4752809 46% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 214.0 442.535393258 48% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80841121495 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 4.55969084622 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48510718242 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 215.323595506 50% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 704.065955056 41% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7957615096 60.3974514979 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.333333333 118.986275619 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7777777778 23.4991977007 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.88888888889 5.21951772744 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170462931547 0.243740707755 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0975317929403 0.0831039109588 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514885570285 0.0758088955206 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115085397393 0.150359130593 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486472830312 0.0667264976115 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 48.8420337079 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 100.480337079 36% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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