You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter
-Say where you think you left the papers
-Explain why they are so important
-Tell the manager what you want him/her to do.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to bring to your notice that I have places some of my vital official documents in your hotel and seeking your assistance in getting the document back.
I visited your hotel to attend a meeting two days ago and the event took place at the Main hall. I remember that I places the documents in the hall but I am perplexed as I cannot remember exactly where I kept it in the room. It can be either on the round table that is behind the stage or on the podium's shelf.
The document is very significant as it contains one of my income certificates. Moreover, it also contains the personal details of all the employees of my company. So I am quite worried that if it is taken by some unauthorized personnel, it will be misused.
I request you to garner those documents as early as possible and so I can send my personal assistant to collect those documents. Perhaps, if you need any proof that the document is mine, I can come in person to collect it.
I hope you will take necessary steps in helping me to get those documents back sooner.
Best wishes,
Smith
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 116, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'place'
Suggestion: place
...ace at the Main hall. I remember that I places the documents in the hall but I am perp...
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Line 4, column 297, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'podiums'' or 'podium's'?
Suggestion: podiums'; podium's
...able that is behind the stage or on the podiums shelf. The document is very signific...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 903.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42647058824 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51811487774 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578431372549 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 288.9 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9831495702 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.0909090909 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5454545455 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.45454545455 4.34317383033 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173406822513 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.055492152838 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532152333983 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0898128560917 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380495792667 0.0580467560999 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 8.62886597938 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.