By punishing murderer with the death penalty, society is also guilty of committing
murder. Therefore, life in prison is a better punishment for murderer.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. you should write at least 250 words.
Society is becoming guilty in some way by punishing the murderer with the death penalty, rather life imprisonment would be the better choice. In my opinion, I agree with this because humans does not have right to kill another human being and life imprisonment will give a chance to the criminals to realise their mistake.
Firstly, humans does not have any rights to kill another human being even if he is a murderer. Everyone has an equal rights to live and enjoy this world’s beauty and no one should interfere their freedom. Further more, by giving death punishment will never be the remedy for the fault he committed. For instance, the famous Cochin murder case where Honorable Supreme Court has punished the convicts and hanged them until death, although, they pleaded for mercy and a new life.
Secondly, when a criminal is been punished with life imprisonment would rather grant him a chance to realise his mistake and step back to his normal life after the jail. The bad experience in the jail would certainly be a lesson of his life and he would attempt to do a good job for society and people. Furthermore he may be a perfect example for the young generations not commit such mistake in their life. For example, in United States, a criminal has been sent to jail for his mistake and when he back from the jail he started helping FBI and become a key person in proving may murder cases.
In conclusion, it is always better to treat murderer as a human being and give him a chance to realise his mistake. Hence I strongly agree that life imprisonment would be the right punishment rather than killing a murderer.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...urder case where Honorable Supreme Court has punished the convicts and hanged the...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...o do a good job for society and people. Furthermore he may be a perfect example for the you...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...ve him a chance to realise his mistake. Hence I strongly agree that life imprisonment...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1350.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70383275261 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46851263193 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526132404181 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.6806901486 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.5 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9166666667 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1666666667 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265775548536 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110767877429 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688903561979 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179227565869 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431229208987 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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