Nowadays, people cannot survive without hard work and education. Work in young age may lead to develop the personality and knowledge. Besides that, some people think that is completely wrong.
Primarily work in small age can influence in negative way on education and health of children. Working with machine is dangerous to them as children do not have proper knowledge and skills. Moreover in young age they are not aware about world as they meet strange people at work and people can misguide the children. Apart from that, in this age children are not strong enough mentally and physically to bear the difficult situations by world. Work in small age make the children depressed.
However , some people believe that work in young age can enhances their knowledge and experience. Children those have work experience in anywhere can be helpful in their future life. They learn new things instead of education. Moreover they become more practical. Children become stronger as they bear difficult conditions at work. Apart from that, children become more optimistic and confident. They can live independently. Children begin to be punctual, sincere and mature. Children gain a lot of qualities from work.
In my perception, work in young age develop the personality of a person. As I belongs to India there are many examples, those became successful in life by hard work instead of study
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, may, moreover, so, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1169.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 227.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14977973568 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63888969885 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541850220264 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 363.6 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.4232942586 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 61.5263157895 106.682146367 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.9473684211 20.7667163134 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.68421052632 7.06120827912 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227104793631 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798458871826 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506195822518 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152293140631 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374529503379 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.31 50.2224549098 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.7 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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